Elevator Pitch No. 3

2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly or amazing and inciteful.
The feedback from the last speech was great. Everyone said I had a great tone to my voice and spoke eloquently. The only problem was that I did not memorize my speech and read through a script.

3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Based on the feedback I was given from the last speech, I memorized my lines for this speech. That was the only problem that was pointed out to me from the feedback.